Ok I just played the Web Demo and I definitely have some feedback, like a bunch of it really. So far I think it's a good start: The art is cute, the sex is hot and well animated, the gameplay is rough but not so terrible it can't be improved upon. Visually, I think Max moves too slow and what is supposed to be a "chase" is more like a leisurely stroll, I understand that if he actually moves too fast then the levels will be much shorter and easier, but I'm not convinced Max is really trying to set a good pace, Basically if his animation had a bit more "hustle" to it that'd feel way better.
Gameplay-wise there are a few things that make the game more difficult than I feel it was intended for. First off his punch and his slide: The punch has just a bit too much time before you can punch again meaning if there is an enemy ahead that takes two or three hits, it's increasingly hard to deal with if there are other threats on the screen. The slide is also the only way to deal with certain enemies and sometimes it simply wouldn't activate, like there seemed to be a LONG cooldown between the ability to slide then slide again but there would also be times when I needed to slide but the slide didn't happen despite not having slid in a while... Additionally there seems to be no way of defending Max from an attack from behind aside from burning a special attack, the punch only goes forward and so does the slide, not to mention you don't have much time to react anyways. Breaking out of grapples also feels very clunky and slow, after hitting a button the player has to wait for the animation before the next one shows up and can be pressed. On the surface this may not seem like an issue but the amount of waiting means no matter how quickly you can accurately press the buttons to "mash out" of it, you are forced to take on a certain level of corruption. Again, I understand that it's supposed to be a challenge and an obstacle but it feels sluggish slow and unresponsive and even unfair.
Now the Sphynx's riddles were.... definitely unfair. I had to brute force my way past that, thankfully you made it checkpoint right before so the player didn't have to replay all of level 2, so good job. I'm gonna discuss each question in order: 1. Never saw a cactuar cause I was busy dodging all the horny enemies, I guessed it right first try tho and it might've been my fault so I can't really say anything about it. 2. Ok I'm forgetting which question was which now but I think the second was about how many elves were on the starting image, I remembered 3 so I was wrong for a while. I went back and saw another elf inside through a window and it took me a while to find the fifth..... the fifth elf was BEHIND the TEXT BOX on the roof. incredibly hard to see. Kinda unfair but whatever, moving on. 3. This gave me trouble as I didn't remember seeing any animal at the start, like ever. I went back to the beginning and there was a bird on the first screen but it was nowhere near Max and it wasn't the answer. Turns out the "Pony" was a stuffed pony in the tent at the start of the first level... not really an animal and arguably not really the beginning either, so maybe the question coulda been more clear. 4. Ok this one was absolute bullshit (pardon my language here but it's true), The question itself was difficult to understand but I think it was asking what color the "Bee" enemies were from the first level. Instead of options like "Orange" or "Blue" you seemed to put in these really obscure color names to choose from. It was like it was in another language, how is a player supposed to know that? It's not even a case of "I don't know so I felt stupid", it felt more like you expected players to have a catalogue of paint samples with fancy color names they could consult. That information was in no way available to the player! 5. The final actual question also confused me as I had never seen Max have writing on his shirt.... Ever.... I can't go back up to replay and check to see if his shirt magically changes in sex scenes, but if it does then you seriously underestimate change-blindness which is a real psychological phenomenon.... Anyways, I guessed it right first try, but wow did this one also feel like unfair bullshit again...
Anyways, If you read this I want you to know I enjoyed the game despite all the problems I found. I think with a bit of fine-tuneing here and there (and obviously more content filled in, but you already know that I imagine) you've got a fun and sexy little game here. I'm not even usually into femboys but most of the enemies are Futa so I still quite enjoyed it in that reguard. Sorry if this feedback is a bit of a ramble but I felt like it could be used to improve maybe. I'll be coming back from time to time to see how this project moves forward. Peace.
I've played ver 2.6 and I've noticed a couple of bugs.
This is not hard per se, but there's a glitch where if you hold down the crouch button (S) while you're getting fked will likely get you locked in place. I have reset a total of 7 times in my playthrough. Another one I could think of is, you can skip Sphinx's riddle if you got hit by a heart(charm) attack at the right moment. And also, the end screen of masturbation is the same as the slime.
Overall, the art is superb, but the gameplay is disappointing, to say the least. This definitely has the potential to be a great game, but I feel like the gameplay needs lots of improvement or an overhaul. This is still a demo so there's still time for changes.
Some changes that would be nice imo: Faster Max - Max is as light as a feather that they will take a couple seconds to land on the ground. This is to better avoid enemies but it coincidentally makes them feel sluggish and not fluid in their movement. Makes me reminiscence about those flash games I played a long time ago that are now obsolete. Secondary Attack - Rather than a simple attack and an Ult, try introducing a secondary attack to spice the game up. Make it customizable for the added fun. Larger FOV - Make the field of view bigger but the enemies faster. This will keep the challenge while making the game more fluid-like and exciting. Maybe add auto-zoom when Max is down. More Lane? - Who can skip this one if you aren't planning for monster girls with complex mechanics. Shoot backward - I mean, is there a reason Max can only face forward? It should make sense that she could shoot her magic anywhere. Make it aimable with mouse so I could shoot those damn bees that charge after me out of nowhere. Nerf slide - wtf, slide op, plz nerf
Though making changes to the game's code is most of the time arduous. I'm sure there are a lot of fans who know programming that are willing to help. In the meantime, I'm absolutely gonna follow the game's production.
lol and this should be long???hav u tryed to create a game so u know how many work they give u??? im waiting since almost 1 years for many games update... trust me 69 days is not so much...and btw 69 is a totally magic number......
Noone did, He or she is just dissapointed that selfish little shits like you go complaning about literally nothing. Be happy with what you got. You try coming up about a femboi elf that goes trough a portal with Blowjob plants and shit. T-Hoodie don't listen to this selfish fuck and take however long you need and like! We support you!
Phantasm867 isn't complaining. He/She is just sad because there were no updates for a long time. 69 days for creating a game or updating it is not a long time, but 69 days waiting is still a long timespan (thats almost 10 fucking weeks). Phantasm867 just didn't know how long it takes to create or update a game.
Don't assume that someone is selfish just because the person is sad that there are no updates. (This comment is not an offend towards you)
Oh I completely understand that He/She/They are sad. But then when someone simply says that 69 days aint a long time and he says ¨Lol who tf hurt you¨ You gotta expect he gets bad reactions
Would be better if it wasn't so damn annoying to get through. Would at least apreciate a way to charge the special and the hitboxes not being so broken. And all of that just for a gallery that doesn't even work -_- also laggy as f#ck (even when dowloaded) for what should be a simple side-scrolling game. 5/10.
I'm having issues downloading the game. Everytime I press the "install" button, it doesn't go through. (Edit) I had to use the website to download the game instead of the itch.io app...that's weird, but hey! I can finally get my elf trap fix.
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cant wayt tell level 3
I wonder when level 3 is out!I got past level 2 to many times and level 3 didn't appear!!
Is it possible to play the online version on Consoles like Xbox
Are You High ?!?!
it's just a question, Calm down. I saw videos and I was curious.
what videos
yo the portrait bug before is gone now!! thanks alot hahaha
what bug what that? ( i have not had it happen so i am just wandering
wait lemme find my old post
oh i found it
you are doing great work. I hope you know that, thank you for this master peace!
patience little boy
1 july
Hi Devs! Reply to this comment if theres an Android app for this one, Thx.
Does the Gallery work? It won't open for me
they are working on making a gallery
ah, i see, thank you
its only the first 2 levels
Wank so good my stomach hurt
Gameplay-wise there are a few things that make the game more difficult than I feel it was intended for. First off his punch and his slide: The punch has just a bit too much time before you can punch again meaning if there is an enemy ahead that takes two or three hits, it's increasingly hard to deal with if there are other threats on the screen. The slide is also the only way to deal with certain enemies and sometimes it simply wouldn't activate, like there seemed to be a LONG cooldown between the ability to slide then slide again but there would also be times when I needed to slide but the slide didn't happen despite not having slid in a while... Additionally there seems to be no way of defending Max from an attack from behind aside from burning a special attack, the punch only goes forward and so does the slide, not to mention you don't have much time to react anyways. Breaking out of grapples also feels very clunky and slow, after hitting a button the player has to wait for the animation before the next one shows up and can be pressed. On the surface this may not seem like an issue but the amount of waiting means no matter how quickly you can accurately press the buttons to "mash out" of it, you are forced to take on a certain level of corruption. Again, I understand that it's supposed to be a challenge and an obstacle but it feels sluggish slow and unresponsive and even unfair.
Now the Sphynx's riddles were.... definitely unfair. I had to brute force my way past that, thankfully you made it checkpoint right before so the player didn't have to replay all of level 2, so good job. I'm gonna discuss each question in order:
1. Never saw a cactuar cause I was busy dodging all the horny enemies, I guessed it right first try tho and it might've been my fault so I can't really say anything about it.
2. Ok I'm forgetting which question was which now but I think the second was about how many elves were on the starting image, I remembered 3 so I was wrong for a while. I went back and saw another elf inside through a window and it took me a while to find the fifth..... the fifth elf was BEHIND the TEXT BOX on the roof. incredibly hard to see. Kinda unfair but whatever, moving on.
3. This gave me trouble as I didn't remember seeing any animal at the start, like ever. I went back to the beginning and there was a bird on the first screen but it was nowhere near Max and it wasn't the answer. Turns out the "Pony" was a stuffed pony in the tent at the start of the first level... not really an animal and arguably not really the beginning either, so maybe the question coulda been more clear.
4. Ok this one was absolute bullshit (pardon my language here but it's true), The question itself was difficult to understand but I think it was asking what color the "Bee" enemies were from the first level. Instead of options like "Orange" or "Blue" you seemed to put in these really obscure color names to choose from. It was like it was in another language, how is a player supposed to know that? It's not even a case of "I don't know so I felt stupid", it felt more like you expected players to have a catalogue of paint samples with fancy color names they could consult. That information was in no way available to the player!
5. The final actual question also confused me as I had never seen Max have writing on his shirt.... Ever.... I can't go back up to replay and check to see if his shirt magically changes in sex scenes, but if it does then you seriously underestimate change-blindness which is a real psychological phenomenon.... Anyways, I guessed it right first try, but wow did this one also feel like unfair bullshit again...
Anyways, If you read this I want you to know I enjoyed the game despite all the problems I found. I think with a bit of fine-tuneing here and there (and obviously more content filled in, but you already know that I imagine) you've got a fun and sexy little game here. I'm not even usually into femboys but most of the enemies are Futa so I still quite enjoyed it in that reguard. Sorry if this feedback is a bit of a ramble but I felt like it could be used to improve maybe. I'll be coming back from time to time to see how this project moves forward. Peace.
I- Don't think T-Hoodie can read this fully.. At least what I think
What do you mean? Why would they not be able to read the comments?
for the game it self or t hoodie?
if so i dont thin so for both
Thinking of making a mobile version?
The creator has stated that they don't have plans for making a mobile version
Understanded
I've played ver 2.6 and I've noticed a couple of bugs.
This is not hard per se, but there's a glitch where if you hold down the crouch button (S) while you're getting fked will likely get you locked in place. I have reset a total of 7 times in my playthrough. Another one I could think of is, you can skip Sphinx's riddle if you got hit by a heart(charm) attack at the right moment. And also, the end screen of masturbation is the same as the slime.
Overall, the art is superb, but the gameplay is disappointing, to say the least. This definitely has the potential to be a great game, but I feel like the gameplay needs lots of improvement or an overhaul. This is still a demo so there's still time for changes.
Some changes that would be nice imo:
Faster Max - Max is as light as a feather that they will take a couple seconds to land on the ground. This is to better avoid enemies but it coincidentally makes them feel sluggish and not fluid in their movement. Makes me reminiscence about those flash games I played a long time ago that are now obsolete.
Secondary Attack - Rather than a simple attack and an Ult, try introducing a secondary attack to spice the game up. Make it customizable for the added fun.
Larger FOV - Make the field of view bigger but the enemies faster. This will keep the challenge while making the game more fluid-like and exciting. Maybe add auto-zoom when Max is down.
More Lane? - Who can skip this one if you aren't planning for monster girls with complex mechanics.
Shoot backward - I mean, is there a reason Max can only face forward? It should make sense that she could shoot her magic anywhere. Make it aimable with mouse so I could shoot those damn bees that charge after me out of nowhere.
Nerf slide - wtf, slide op, plz nerf
Though making changes to the game's code is most of the time arduous. I'm sure there are a lot of fans who know programming that are willing to help. In the meantime, I'm absolutely gonna follow the game's production.
<3
This game is very simple, but amazing!
new update comes july 1st
Im excited!
This is the best game I've ever played in this section surprisingly.
#PrideMonth
Target Terminated
Defineatly Need This Game On Android
*skeleton behind the desk*
waiting for an update be like
it has been 69 days since the last update :(
lol and this should be long???hav u tryed to create a game so u know how many work they give u??? im waiting since almost 1 years for many games update... trust me 69 days is not so much...and btw 69 is a totally magic number......
lol who tf hurt you?
Noone did, He or she is just dissapointed that selfish little shits like you go complaning about literally nothing. Be happy with what you got. You try coming up about a femboi elf that goes trough a portal with Blowjob plants and shit. T-Hoodie don't listen to this selfish fuck and take however long you need and like! We support you!
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Phantasm867 isn't complaining. He/She is just sad because there were no updates for a long time. 69 days for creating a game or updating it is not a long time, but 69 days waiting is still a long timespan (thats almost 10 fucking weeks). Phantasm867 just didn't know how long it takes to create or update a game.
Don't assume that someone is selfish just because the person is sad that there are no updates. (This comment is not an offend towards you)
Oh I completely understand that He/She/They are sad. But then when someone simply says that 69 days aint a long time and he says ¨Lol who tf hurt you¨ You gotta expect he gets bad reactions
1. 69 days are long (not for creating or updating games tho).
2. Since he/she said that you can already think to yourself that he doesn't know how much time it takes to create or update games.
3. Maybe he/she isn't used to waiting 1 year or more for a game like you are. He/she is probably just not used to it.
4. He/She isn't complaining to T-Hoodie, just commenting that he/she is sad that there are no updates.
You would probably also be sad if there are no updates coming out for games that you like.
5. I totally agree with you 69 is a magic number.
hitboxes r stupid basic attacks are basically inefficient good femboy porn though
Would be better if it wasn't so damn annoying to get through. Would at least apreciate a way to charge the special and the hitboxes not being so broken. And all of that just for a gallery that doesn't even work -_- also laggy as f#ck (even when dowloaded) for what should be a simple side-scrolling game. 5/10.
it;s not laggy for me also you might jut be bad bro cuz i beat in in like 5 mins
I can not play the game and I do not know who knows how to play ???
Can you released the game in Android?
(Sorry bad English)
Love this game! best dev ever
stange question but ever plan on making a variant where max is a female instead of a femboy? like an option
join us, become gay
sorry man we gotta a normal childhood....so pretty impossible that we change factions....
umm that has nothing to do with what one likes
or bi/pan*
i feel like lammie makes the game more complicated.Love her design and animations,but its hard to get away from her.
i find it easier to slide after knocking her down try that
oh, thanks for the tip!! :)
the game keeps saying not responding every time i would try to get it to run so i have to shut down chrome to close it. kinda sus
great game, it deserves a special sequel ♥️
So I have a slight problem, everytime the game starts to load it freezes so I haven't gotten to the gameplay.
definitely gets the jobs done... love the art to...
I'm having issues downloading the game. Everytime I press the "install" button, it doesn't go through. (Edit) I had to use the website to download the game instead of the itch.io app...that's weird, but hey! I can finally get my elf trap fix.
well well, everyone here has been caught in 4k
but your here too
no im not shhh...
then how did u reply :o
shh.. you may never know.
nothing better than this comes at sight in this website tbh